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Forgive Me by AyyaSap Forgive Me by AyyaSap
Yay!I am a dummy!  my first award on deviantart! Oh my God, this is so unexpected! I'm very glad, I overwhelmed with emotion!:happybounce:  I do not know what else to say! it is very pleasing and it gave me an even greater flow of inspiration and desire to paint more, and better!Love  I hope that this is one of my many awards, as this gave me greater confidence, and confidence to my possibilities!La la la la  I want to say thank you to all those who contributed to the fact that I was honored this award, all hugs and kisses!Hug  and thank you all for your views, favs and comments, you are the best!Huggle! 
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Given 2014-08-11
The expression of the character says a thousand words with just one look. A great scene with a touch of sensuality and a lot of emotion.
Forgive Me by AyyaSap ( Suggested by latent-ookami and Featured by Thiefoworld )
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I do declare my friend that this, is a very beautiful piece. The way you did the hair was amazing and very detailed, also the face was very well textured, yet I was wondering about the right ear. I seems a bit discolored in my opinion, for that would have been an appropriate thing to do if there was another light source, or if there was a surface in which light was reflecting off of. The shoulder was done with a shadow and, along with the light source angle and lack of bubbles for the light to reflect through or off of, I find that area a bit off.

Speaking of bubbles, along her shoulders, breasts, and knee there is a white lining. I understand that that line was most likely needed to indicate where the bubbles would go, but now it seems a bit odd, for it gives the idea that the bubbles are under water.

A minor oddity I see is with the nose for there is a semi-blended part where the nose should have stopped, the philtrum would have began and ended at the lip yet the philtrum seemed to have merged with the nose yet it shouldn't have done that.

Another thing that bothers me is that the necklace needs a shadow. I presume that it's supposed to be round, but the way you drew it, makes it seem as if the gem should be round.

Finally, my last remark would be about the expression on her face in accordance to the fact that her grip upon the blade seems to be harsh. Since she griping it so harshly she should have some semblance of an expression on her face. Examples would be a, grimace, a cease of the brow, or a closing of the eyes.

Everything else was superb, so just continue what your ding cause your awesome. :)
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I agree, this is a wonderful piece. I have to disagree with the above critique on one point, the right ear coloring seems right. It is wet and reflecting the color of the tub, the hair around it seems more the issue, as it is not reflecting the color.

I could be wrong on this and it is minor, but the necklace could probably use a little more foreshortening. and the bubbles below the right hand would probably carry a little more flesh tone where the skin is nearer the surface of the bubbles.

That is it for criticism, now the good stuff: The skin looks perfect. those highlights are amazingly well done. The tub itself is rendered beautifully and the bubbles look painstakingly well done. The shadows across her face are dynamic and interesting. People often lose detail within shadows, but you have kept the detail and her beauty intact.

I would give this a solid 4 out of 5.
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:iconkeller88:
keller88 Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
Freakin awesome ! ♥
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:iconjullezart:
JullezArt Featured By Owner May 11, 2015  Professional Digital Artist
great illustration
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:iconjoefj:
joeFJ Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Student Digital Artist
reminds me of Rihanna in "Stay". Awesome none the less.
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:iconredpill7:
REDPILL7 Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
Beautiful
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:iconguylian8:
Guylian8 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2015
One word describes when I'm looking at this: wow! Just everything about this picture
I really like it
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:icontigerlova06:
tigerlova06 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is absolutely beautiful☺
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:iconleoncrazy59:
Leoncrazy59 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 5, 2015
Everything about her is amazing.  Her body, the way the hair is lying about, the eyes, the eyes, the mouth, the eyes, it all seems so realistic.

If I may ask, what kind of back-story did you make for this picture when you created it?
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:iconpatchy-fan:
patchy-fan Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015  Student General Artist
This is very detailed! Good job on the art! 😁
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:iconsupermaxxx:
supermaxxx Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2015
just stunning
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:iconlynx199:
lynx199 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
I don't want her to die!! The hell NO!
She just amazing, and beautiful, and hot, and...
Great job and Congratulation!!! ;) (Wink) Heart 
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:iconseol13:
Seol13 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing!!!
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:iconballoonprincess:
BalloonPrincess Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Magnificent!  :)
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:iconv3sh4:
v3sh4 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
teuhah abah bak takaleun.. 4 thumbs up!!
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:iconkaze26:
kaze26 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015
amazing
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:iconrflzqt:
RFLzQt Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Everything about this is stunnning!
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:icon1andonlycrazist:
1andonlycrazist Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
Miranda Lawson!?
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:iconnilvirgil:
nilvirgil Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
:iconpinkheart-plz: :iconheartglompplz: :iconflyingheartsplz: :iconhrtplz:
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:iconkiwalai:
kiwalai Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ummmm
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:iconmockingbirdontree:
mockingbirdontree Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015
A wonderful picture. But its heartbreaking. No young person should ever be in the situation to see no other way out than suicide.
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:iconyayaartpop:
yayaartpop Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015   Photographer
Wow so perfect !
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:iconrakazo07:
rakazo07 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
cool
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3
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:iconlesimmons:
LESimmons Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Looking like this is about to turn into a blood bath.
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:iconevantulac-123:
evantulac-123 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Professional Artist
She has such beautiful big breasts.
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:iconmaytemg:
Maytemg Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a grate piece :) 
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:iconkratosismad:
Kratosismad Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
There's a hint of sadness to this piece. I like that.
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:iconb4ld3r:
B4LD3R Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
At first i thought she was Megan Fox, sure this deviation is a "booby" Titties trap but very well done ^^
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:iconkaiverta:
kaiverta Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Wow, the water effect is awesome. Congrats. :D
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:iconimlovingdn:
ImLovingDN Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015
Amazing!
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:iconjoephilliactheblack:
JoePhilliacTheBlack Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
Oh my Bob.  This is so freaking gorgeous. Faved!
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:iconasari13:
asari13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sexy
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:iconsavu2512:
SaVu2512 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
:squee: :squee: :squee:  Love it XDDDDDDD
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:iconzechary3:
Zechary3 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015  Professional Traditional Artist
great piece.
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:iconsandraws:
Sandraws Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is stunning. My favorite part: the eyes. But I love it all, nothing to say just perfect, the wet effect is really amaziiiiing!!!! You deserved the award because this rocks!!! Keep doing this amazing stuff because I'm watching you!! ^^ hugs :3 Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart 
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:iconjoellegodro:
joellegodro Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG! I'm speechless!
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:iconboudartmoreau2:
boudartmoreau2 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015
Superb !! :)
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:iconanntnsu:
AnnTnsu Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BeautifulMio (Scared) [V2] 
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:iconjosephcamez:
josephcamez Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015
yea you need forgiveness for drawing this 
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:iconthe-winter-girl:
the-winter-girl Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Student General Artist
That's a stunning work!
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:iconmslinn:
MsLinn Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Отлично нарисованоLove Прям ну очень-оченьHeart 
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:iconrnnoochan:
RnnOoChan Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm speechless .. *-*
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:iconsaralauren:
SaraLauren Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
OMG is so awesome
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:iconnilvirgil:
nilvirgil Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
so nice
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:iconrotemg20:
rotemg20 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
God it's so beautiful! Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] 
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:iconfelicityforlorn5:
FelicityForlorn5 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Amazing!
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:iconnefr1t:
Nefr1t Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014
Gratz with dd awesome work :) 
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:iconvril1:
vril1 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Professional Photographer
superb!!!!
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:iconkyleraine:
KyleRaine Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
JFC - Outrageously awesome - all the good stuff said is quite honestly true, if not understating. Sensational. Alive. Moving. Thank you very much.
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:iconthefallingriot:
TheFallingRiot Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
such realism how pretty
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:iconkawahi:
Kawahi Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really wonderful......
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