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Forgive Me by AyyaSap Forgive Me by AyyaSap
Yay!I am a dummy!  my first award on deviantart! Oh my God, this is so unexpected! I'm very glad, I overwhelmed with emotion!:happybounce:  I do not know what else to say! it is very pleasing and it gave me an even greater flow of inspiration and desire to paint more, and better!Love  I hope that this is one of my many awards, as this gave me greater confidence, and confidence to my possibilities!La la la la  I want to say thank you to all those who contributed to the fact that I was honored this award, all hugs and kisses!Hug  and thank you all for your views, favs and comments, you are the best!Huggle! 
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Given 2014-08-11
The expression of the character says a thousand words with just one look. A great scene with a touch of sensuality and a lot of emotion.
Forgive Me by AyyaSap ( Suggested by latent-ookami and Featured by Thiefoworld )
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I do declare my friend that this, is a very beautiful piece. The way you did the hair was amazing and very detailed, also the face was very well textured, yet I was wondering about the right ear. I seems a bit discolored in my opinion, for that would have been an appropriate thing to do if there was another light source, or if there was a surface in which light was reflecting off of. The shoulder was done with a shadow and, along with the light source angle and lack of bubbles for the light to reflect through or off of, I find that area a bit off.

Speaking of bubbles, along her shoulders, breasts, and knee there is a white lining. I understand that that line was most likely needed to indicate where the bubbles would go, but now it seems a bit odd, for it gives the idea that the bubbles are under water.

A minor oddity I see is with the nose for there is a semi-blended part where the nose should have stopped, the philtrum would have began and ended at the lip yet the philtrum seemed to have merged with the nose yet it shouldn't have done that.

Another thing that bothers me is that the necklace needs a shadow. I presume that it's supposed to be round, but the way you drew it, makes it seem as if the gem should be round.

Finally, my last remark would be about the expression on her face in accordance to the fact that her grip upon the blade seems to be harsh. Since she griping it so harshly she should have some semblance of an expression on her face. Examples would be a, grimace, a cease of the brow, or a closing of the eyes.

Everything else was superb, so just continue what your ding cause your awesome. :)
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I agree, this is a wonderful piece. I have to disagree with the above critique on one point, the right ear coloring seems right. It is wet and reflecting the color of the tub, the hair around it seems more the issue, as it is not reflecting the color.

I could be wrong on this and it is minor, but the necklace could probably use a little more foreshortening. and the bubbles below the right hand would probably carry a little more flesh tone where the skin is nearer the surface of the bubbles.

That is it for criticism, now the good stuff: The skin looks perfect. those highlights are amazingly well done. The tub itself is rendered beautifully and the bubbles look painstakingly well done. The shadows across her face are dynamic and interesting. People often lose detail within shadows, but you have kept the detail and her beauty intact.

I would give this a solid 4 out of 5.
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DaimoNxx Featured By Owner 2 days ago
Exquisite work
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latent-ookami Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014  Professional General Artist
You deserve it!! :huggle:!  Congrats!!!
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AyyaSap Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks again! Hug Meow :3 
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eplokz1308 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks 3D in far view, DAMN.. Its really amazing. Her eyes were so expressive. Excellent work! ~! like!
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master-of-dizazter Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
this is awesome!! i love the way you made her skin look really wet! i love it!!
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virtualTune Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Student Photographer
As seen on 9gag (uncredited) -.-
Either way very well painted and a fantastic expression with so many emotions at once. Also really like the little tear rolling out of her right eye. 
There are a few minor aspects that aren't perfect, but one has to be quite ignorant to criticize them, as they clearly do not take away from the impact of the overall image. 
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Professional General Artist
is great...you deserve...is perfect- don't forget ur  friends...lol !
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AyyaSap Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
thank you very much my friendHug 
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YOKOKY Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Professional General Artist
all i say is just for your fame....i cross this,dear -welcome
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Fangled-Robin Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
Sheer excellence and a fave for me. :clap:
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