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I do declare my friend that this, is a very beautiful piece. The way you did the hair was amazing and very detailed, also the face was very well textured, yet I was wondering about the right ear. I seems a bit discolored in my opinion, for that would have been an appropriate thing to do if there was another light source, or if there was a surface in which light was reflecting off of. The shoulder was done with a shadow and, along with the light source angle and lack of bubbles for the light to reflect through or off of, I find that area a bit off.

Speaking of bubbles, along her shoulders, breasts, and knee there is a white lining. I understand that that line was most likely needed to indicate where the bubbles would go, but now it seems a bit odd, for it gives the idea that the bubbles are under water.

A minor oddity I see is with the nose for there is a semi-blended part where the nose should have stopped, the philtrum would have began and ended at the lip yet the philtrum seemed to have merged with the nose yet it shouldn't have done that.

Another thing that bothers me is that the necklace needs a shadow. I presume that it's supposed to be round, but the way you drew it, makes it seem as if the gem should be round.

Finally, my last remark would be about the expression on her face in accordance to the fact that her grip upon the blade seems to be harsh. Since she griping it so harshly she should have some semblance of an expression on her face. Examples would be a, grimace, a cease of the brow, or a closing of the eyes.

Everything else was superb, so just continue what your ding cause your awesome. :)
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I agree, this is a wonderful piece. I have to disagree with the above critique on one point, the right ear coloring seems right. It is wet and reflecting the color of the tub, the hair around it seems more the issue, as it is not reflecting the color.

I could be wrong on this and it is minor, but the necklace could probably use a little more foreshortening. and the bubbles below the right hand would probably carry a little more flesh tone where the skin is nearer the surface of the bubbles.

That is it for criticism, now the good stuff: The skin looks perfect. those highlights are amazingly well done. The tub itself is rendered beautifully and the bubbles look painstakingly well done. The shadows across her face are dynamic and interesting. People often lose detail within shadows, but you have kept the detail and her beauty intact.

I would give this a solid 4 out of 5.
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CheeseburgerTom Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
You draw wet skin very well.
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Kanji-The-Wanderer Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Wonderful~!
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Ultamisia Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
really well done! :D
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Travonstatus Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2014
nice work
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GoreManiac Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
Really great pic. She is gorgeous and very sexy.
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HunterWithoutHead Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Самый лучший рисунок ;)
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AyyaSap Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
пасиб :3
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Sci-mind156 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014
Great stuff! I love the wet effect!
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peccatori Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Giggle Wow! Meow :3 
Awesome work! :3
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Antonio-Figueiredo Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
wooow, looks like wax ..
Fantastic
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