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Forgive Me by AyyaSap Forgive Me by AyyaSap
Yay!I am a dummy!  my first award on deviantart! Oh my God, this is so unexpected! I'm very glad, I overwhelmed with emotion!:happybounce:  I do not know what else to say! it is very pleasing and it gave me an even greater flow of inspiration and desire to paint more, and better!Love  I hope that this is one of my many awards, as this gave me greater confidence, and confidence to my possibilities!La la la la  I want to say thank you to all those who contributed to the fact that I was honored this award, all hugs and kisses!Hug  and thank you all for your views, favs and comments, you are the best!Huggle! 
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Given 2014-08-11
The expression of the character says a thousand words with just one look. A great scene with a touch of sensuality and a lot of emotion.
Forgive Me by AyyaSap ( Suggested by latent-ookami and Featured by Thiefoworld )
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I do declare my friend that this, is a very beautiful piece. The way you did the hair was amazing and very detailed, also the face was very well textured, yet I was wondering about the right ear. I seems a bit discolored in my opinion, for that would have been an appropriate thing to do if there was another light source, or if there was a surface in which light was reflecting off of. The shoulder was done with a shadow and, along with the light source angle and lack of bubbles for the light to reflect through or off of, I find that area a bit off.

Speaking of bubbles, along her shoulders, breasts, and knee there is a white lining. I understand that that line was most likely needed to indicate where the bubbles would go, but now it seems a bit odd, for it gives the idea that the bubbles are under water.

A minor oddity I see is with the nose for there is a semi-blended part where the nose should have stopped, the philtrum would have began and ended at the lip yet the philtrum seemed to have merged with the nose yet it shouldn't have done that.

Another thing that bothers me is that the necklace needs a shadow. I presume that it's supposed to be round, but the way you drew it, makes it seem as if the gem should be round.

Finally, my last remark would be about the expression on her face in accordance to the fact that her grip upon the blade seems to be harsh. Since she griping it so harshly she should have some semblance of an expression on her face. Examples would be a, grimace, a cease of the brow, or a closing of the eyes.

Everything else was superb, so just continue what your ding cause your awesome. :)
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I agree, this is a wonderful piece. I have to disagree with the above critique on one point, the right ear coloring seems right. It is wet and reflecting the color of the tub, the hair around it seems more the issue, as it is not reflecting the color.

I could be wrong on this and it is minor, but the necklace could probably use a little more foreshortening. and the bubbles below the right hand would probably carry a little more flesh tone where the skin is nearer the surface of the bubbles.

That is it for criticism, now the good stuff: The skin looks perfect. those highlights are amazingly well done. The tub itself is rendered beautifully and the bubbles look painstakingly well done. The shadows across her face are dynamic and interesting. People often lose detail within shadows, but you have kept the detail and her beauty intact.

I would give this a solid 4 out of 5.
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rotemg20 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2014
God it's so beautiful! Llama Emoji-08 (Crying) [V1] 
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FelicityForlorn5 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  New member Student Digital Artist
Amazing!
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Nefr1t Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014
Gratz with dd awesome work :) 
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vril1 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Professional Photographer
superb!!!!
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KyleRaine Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
JFC - Outrageously awesome - all the good stuff said is quite honestly true, if not understating. Sensational. Alive. Moving. Thank you very much.
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TheFallingRiot Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
such realism how pretty
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Kawahi Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really wonderful......
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hujif Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014
mind... blown.

well done in every aspect.
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Swifty-TheVagabond Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
O.O just.... wow... I forgives you, and the lady in the picture :3
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DaimoNxx Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014
Exquisite work
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